The first draft mostly needed tweaking little parts at first such as when each character is introduced I hadn't stated what they were wearing, the setting wasn't particularly clear so they were the first things I addressed in my second draft.
Getting used to the soft ware i used for my script was a bit tricky at first as I had to make sure everything was set out correctly and in the right format.
In the parts of my script I have worded it differently examples of this are Where George 'shows Sam to the jump' it has now changed to 'George leads the way to the jump' and where Sam falls of his bike I changed it from 'Sam hurts himself badly' to 'Sam clutches his arm in pain' as it generalises whats going on and will help the actors when it comes to shooting on how to act this out, it also gives us a visual of what happens rather than before when it was more cerebral.
There were certain parts in my script that needed to be bulked out a little more to help make it more understandable to what goes on in that scene an example of this would be when the three boys are arguing and a man walks past kicking his dog.
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